Question.3826 - Just like last time, this is a two part assignment. Part 1: Post a complete draft of your historical film analysis essay here for peer review as early in the week as possible. Remember, 1000 words minimum along with a works cited with five academic sources acquired on the LARC databases. Part 2: Review the projects of TWO other students by Friday at 5:00. Respond to each of the following questions in your review Copy and paste the student's thesis statement Offer advice for improving the thesis focusing on the clarity of their three evaluation criteria. How can the student author improve support of the thesis? How effectively does the author utilize their five sources in their essay? Think about intro-tag-quote-cite-explain from the Mock Essay. Do they implement those techniques effectively? Do they properly cite their paraphrases and quotes in the essay? Do they utilize all five sources? How effectively does the author utilize evidence from the film in their essay? How could they better utilize example moments from the film to support their criteria? Provide the student author with specific examples of mechanical problems in the paper. Is every quote properly synthesized into the paragraphs supporting their evaluation criteria? In what other ways can the paper be improved? As you know, peer review points are earned by posting your own complete essay and by reviewing others' papers by the due date. Reply
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xxxxxxxx instead xxxxxxxxx them xx a xxxxxxxxxx and xxxxxxxxx dubious xxxxxxxx The xxxx character xx the xxxxx Balian xx shown xx a xxxxxxx grounded xxxxxxx who xxxxxx the xxxxxxxxxx of xxx Crusades xxxxxxxxxx in xxxxx of xxx atrocities xxxxxxx out xx the xxxx of xxxxxxxx Saladin xxxx Baldwin xx of xxxxxxxxx and xxxxx Christian xxx Muslim xxxxxxxxx are xxxxx in xxx movie xx kind xxx reasonable xxxxxx implying xxxx diplomacy xxx politics xxxxxx a xxxx significant xxxx than xxxx for xxxxxxxx Nonetheless xxxxxxxxxx data xxxxxxxx that xxxxxxxxx reasons xxxx a xxxxx driving xxxxx behind xxx Crusades xx an xxxxxx to xxxx Christians xxxx Muslim xxxx over xxxxxxxxx and xxx Holy xxxx Pope xxxxx II xxxxxx for xxx First xxxxxxx in xxx presented xx as x holy xxx Historian xxxxxx Madden xxxxxx that xxxxxxxxx eschatology xxxxxxxxxxxxx influenced xxx Crusades xxx that xxxx Crusaders xxx their xxxxxxxxxxxxx as x means xx achieving xxxxxxxxx and xxxxxxxx out xxxxx religious xxxxxxxxxx The xxxx portrays xxxxxx as xxxxxxxxx starkly xxxxxxxxxxx the xxxxxxxxxx religious xxxxxx that xxxxxx many xx the xxxx Crusaders xxxxxxxx Ridley xxxxxxx inventive xxxxxxxx modernizes xxx character's xxxxxxxxxxx and xxxxx them xxxx relevant xx a xxxxxx audience xx lessens xxx period's xxxxxxxxxx authenticity xxxxxxxxxxx the xxxxx oversimplifies xxx religious xxxxxxxxx that xxxxx between xxxxxxx and xxxxxxxxxx Though xxxxxxxxxx reports xxxxxxxx that xxx Crusades xxxx characterized xx periods xx tremendous xxxxxxxxx violence xxx persecution xx both xxxxx Saladin xx portrayed xx a xxxxx tolerant xxxx The xxxxx romanticizes xxx harmonious xxxxxxxxxxxx of xxxxxxx and xxxxxxxxxx in xxxxxxxxx while xxxxxxxxxxx the xxxxxxxxxxxxx theological xxxxxxxx that xxx to xxx Crusades xxx battle xxxxxx highlight xxxxxx Scott's xxxxx at xxxxxxxx visually xxxxxxxx and xxxxxxxx combat xxxxxx that xxx among xxx most xxxxxxxxx parts xx Kingdom xx Heaven xxxxx are xxxxxxx battles xxxxx towers xxx catapults xx this xxxxxxxxx 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xx Saladin xx not xxxxxx wrong xx romanticises xxx character xx fit xxx premise xx mutual xxxxxxx between xxxxxxxxx and xxxxxx leaders xxx Leper xxxx or xxxx Baldwin xx of xxxxxxxxx is xxxxxxx significant xxxxxxxxx in xxx movie xxxxxxx despite xxx crippling xxxxxxx is xxxxx in xxx Kingdom xx Heaven xx a xxxxxx and xxxxxxxxxxxxx monarch xxx strives xxx harmony xxxxxxx Christians xxx Muslims xxx film xxxxxxxxx the xxxxxxx political xxxxxxx in xxxxxxxxx but xx accurately xxxxxxx Baldwin's xxxxxxx and xxx attempts xx keep xxx peace xxxxxxxx conflicts xxxxx the xxxxxxxx nations xxxxxxxxxx Baldwin's xxxxx were xxxxxxxxxxxxx by xxxxxxxxx for xxxxxxxxx and xxxxx The xxx Baldwin xx portrayed xx the xxxxx as x tragic xxxxxxx man xxxxxxx these xxxxx struggles xx favour xx highlighting xxx battle xxxx leprosy xxx Crusades xxx depicted xx the xxxxxxx of xxxxxx in x visually xxxxxxxxxxx and xxxxxxxxxxx compelling xxx although xx significantly xxxxxx historical xxxxx In xxxxx to xxx the xxxxx the 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