Question.4247 - Narrative FiveNew Attempt Due Tuesday by 11pm Points 10 Submitting a text entry box or a file uploadBackgroundMake up an excuse to help to sharpen your observation of adversity and emotional responses.Spend some time considering dialogue tags.Example“The Excuse”scene from The Blues BrothersJake apparently left a woman at the altar. The jilted woman returns to visit Jake years later (gun in hand). Here’s the scene:Woman: You contemptible pig. I remained celibate for you. I stood at the back of a cathedral, waiting in celibacy for you, with 300 friends and relatives in attendance. My uncle hired the best Romanian caterer in the state. To obtain the seven limousines for the wedding party, my father used up his last favors with Mad Pete Trollo. So for me, for my mother, my grandmother, my father, my uncle and for the common good, I must now kill you and your brother.[Jake gets up and slowly walks towards her.]Jake: [Falling to his knees before her]Oh please don't kill us. Please, please don't kill us. You know I love ya baby, I wouldn't leave ya. It wasn't my fault.Women: You miserable slug. You think you can talk your way out of this? You betrayed me.Jake: No, I didn't. Honest. I ran outta gas. I had a flat tire. I didn't have enough money for cab fare. My tux didn't come back from the cleaners. An old friend came in from out of town. Someone stole my car. There was an earthquake, a terrible flood, locusts. It wasn't my fault!! I swear to God!! Woman: Oh Jake, Jake, honey.Specifics of the Assignment In a minimum of 250 words, consider someone else who is in need of an excuse. In this case, build on their perceived personality https://lrccd.instructure.com/courses/262246/assignments/7157459 1/32/18/25, 10:44 PM Narrative Five How would s/he genuinely sound? Would s/he be dismissive? How would s/he explain a transgression or error? (For example, would Eve’s excuse to God involve a swipe at Adam?) Do your best to stay true to the individual’s personality. Draw on the power of dialogue. Try out expected or preposterous explanations. Do not write this in script format. Use dialogue tags to help convey emotion. Additionally, in a minimum of fifty words, please describe: What is your personal vision for this piece? What was your inspiration? What do you want us to pay attention to as we are reading it? Make sure to post your draft on time and offer peer review by Friday. As you respond, offer constructive criticism, specific solutions, and detailed solutions in addition to praise. You will engage in the process on a weekly basis.Due DatePlease post your narratives each week on Tuesday, by 11pm.AssessmentI will post my feedback on your assignment within five days of the assignment deadline. You can find my feedback by accessing your assignment in Grades, selecting the Rubric icon, and reading my comments within the rubric.Wondering how narratives are assessed? Please see the grading rubric below for guidance on what is expected for full credit.HelpThe following may help you complete this task:How do I upload a file as an assignment submission in Canvas?(https://community.canvaslms.com/docs/DOC-10663-421254353)How do I upload a file from Google Drive as an assignment submission in Canvas?(https://community.canvaslms.com/docs/DOC-10472-4212344077)How do I view the rubric for my assignment? (https://community.canvaslms.com/docs/DOC-10662-421254352)How do I view the rubric results for my assignments?(https://community.canvaslms.com/docs/DOC-10491-421267891)How do I view feedback/comments from my instructor?(https://community.canvaslms.com/docs/DOC-10666-how-do-i-view-assignment-comments-from-my-instructor) https://lrccd.instructure.com/courses/262246/assignments/7157459 2/32/18/25, 10:44 PM Narrative FiveClick Next at the bottom right of each page to move through the Modules. Narratives - Four Criteria Criteria Ratings Pts Specifics of 5 pts 3 pts 0 pts the Meets the assignment Partially meets the Does not meet the 5 pts Assignment guidelines assignment guidelines assignment guidelines Creativity 3 pts 2 pts 0 pts Offers a fresh approach to the The draft contains clichés, Needs to work assignment, creative word unrealistic dialogue/actions, with figurative 3 pts choices and figurative lacks verisimilitude language language Formatting 1 pts 0 pts Spends time paragraphing, formatting dialogue, Does not attend to formatting placing punctuation inside quotation marks, guidelines 1 pts using dialogue tags, and includes a title (beyond * See the formatting guidelines at: the assignment name and number) https://tinyurl.com/4seu24n8 Revision 1 pts 0 pts Demonstrates writer has prepared a Needs to spend more time refining at 1 pts product that is relatively free of errors the sentence level; a tool, such as that impede meaning Grammarly, can help Total Points: 10
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